rate_review Reviews

Overall good story so far. There are some rather odd things where you are apparently trying to show that Kathy, being from an earlier time in the 20th century. wouldn't have the same knowledge that Snape and Dumbledore do. Still, some of it's excessive, like not ever having seen a black man before. Otherwise, a good chapter.

I saw this story recommended on tambrathegreat's page. It's very good. Nice to see something so original with an OC that's definitely not a Mary Sue. Good OCs are rare. I'll go back to reading now.

That was awesome. You have a flair for dry British humor and I laughed out loud with this one and "Grindelwald"; love your writing style.

WAAAAAAAAA! *tears* that was a great story... i loved it! lol reading a story when finished is different then reading it when it is written simply because you can read the a/n and see the uncertainty and wavering of the author in times of choices... when you started you wrote something like "just stick with me i don't know where this is taking me" well it took you and the rest of us on a wonderful ride... if i might take one suggestion thought it would be that often times quotation marks where missing or in the wrong spot... making the reader go back and figure out if something was being spoken or not, this suggestion has nothing at all to do with your story or writing style (which were soooooo good) but something that could easily be fixed with a beta or willing friend who happens to be good at grammer lol well u can just dismiss my comment altogether if you wish as long as you keep writing :) well on to read more of ur works ^.^

Finally finished the story. Love how you made the story go with the original. Liked how you mapped out the lives of the Snapes and their children. Great job!

Sansa

You are with out a doubt my favorite Snape writer. Brilliant story

How sad this chapter was. I really felt for both of them. Poor Kathy, to see what a monster her friend had become, and poor Severus to have to face losing his love for a second time in his life.

I like the incredible bubble shrinking machine. Hilarious.

Aw, beautiful ending. I'm sorry to see that your son was sent back to Iraq after being injured there. I will keep you in my thoughts, and say a prayer for you at Thanksgiving. I hope things go well for you. Oh, and by the way, great story.

Yet another satisfying conclusion! Brava! Brava! Encore!