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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good start.
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter!!! I go for option three
schedule
October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think that i'll throw my lot in with option #2! cant wait to see what happens next so up-dates soon please! oh also cout maybe the twins siri and remie stay with him...the others can piss off but i just cant take it if the twins leave him!
schedule
October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*glomp*
*lick*
Loves you.
Jane.
*lick*
Loves you.
Jane.
schedule
October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A good beginning, but as of yet there is nothing that you advertise. On the other hand, I don't think I would be satisfied without a good intro.
You've done a good job, I'm interested in what happens next, want to know where Harry disapears and why does he do it, and more importantly what is he doing, and why the Order doesn't care that much and why do they practically allow it and I have many more questions, which I hope will be answered in future chapters.
All in all, it has a potential to be great and well-written story with good plot. Can't wait to read more.
You've done a good job, I'm interested in what happens next, want to know where Harry disapears and why does he do it, and more importantly what is he doing, and why the Order doesn't care that much and why do they practically allow it and I have many more questions, which I hope will be answered in future chapters.
All in all, it has a potential to be great and well-written story with good plot. Can't wait to read more.
schedule
October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the pregnancy and the vampire and veela councils. I dont mind the horrid friends and family just not Remus and Sirius they need to stick by Harry!!
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October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW I love Lucius and Harry Please write more! I vote for option 2. Sigh... Lucius kissing Harry... don't leave me in suspense too long PLEASE!!!