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*Sighs* LOVE IT! youre wonderful Rei! *gives kudos*

1..2..3, AAAAW! *a roar and applause frm the audience* *breaks out the confetti and clappers* BRAVA! i like you romaticalness. ^^ good god he's so much like snape it's scary. know-it-all, haha, it seems to have stood the test of time. and cissy and sirius are great, perfect mix of potter and malfoy. look at you! following thru and finishing your first fic, and with nearly inhuman speed i might add! you'll b happy to know that you the first author i've been keeping track of for this long and, loyal soul that i am, you won't be losing this reviewer anytime soon. y'know, ya could make a whole new fic branching offa this one, focusing but not solely about the new new gen characters. if the plot bunnies start nipping. not lots do it especially with 2 oc's, but i think with the following of this fic ya might b able to pull it off. but at the moment it's too soon; and i'm sure ur all worn out on this fic's side of the brain. just stray ideas floating through. good reviewers feed their author's muse! >;P

I am absolutely loving this story. Please send the Epilogue!!!!!!

Chapter 45 - Am I psychic?! I'm so happy that Anise used the Loa to bring Draco back to life and that he repelled it!!!! now to get them together!!! on to the end chapter now.....

That was so sweet how you thanked me in the end chapter!!!, now I really do feel guilty for not checking the updates, but 12 hour shifts really do take it out of you honest!! I am off ill today and was really happy and sad at the same time to see I could read some more of this fantastic story and that it was complete. I loved the ending I hope you put Hermione's and Snape's child in the epilogue, maybe in the future then we can see Draco and Anise's future outside of her being an Hogwarts student!! anyway whatever you do I'm sure it'll be fantastic. Just to let you know I started reading this story at a really depressing time of my life and you really helped me get over a lot of bad emotions and start to see things more positive again and I just want to say a huge thank you and I really honestly mean thatxx Please don't take too long with the epilogue!! maybe weekend I'm off then ;) xax

that was so fucking awsum i loved it i carnt wait for your other stors to be compelted anyway brill fic see u soon
belixz

I... I... think I hate you. *sniff, sniff*

I loved... nay, nay... LOVE Draco and you--you-- YOU KILLED HIM! If it weren't for the fact that you were such a brilliant writer and your story is addicting and your characters in tact, I would sooooo be angry at you! However, you are too interesting for me to be angry at for long, so I am going to get over it and read more.

I weep for you... you must be heartbroken to be finished, and if you aren't, I can guarentee you that I am. I am going to miss this story alot!!!!
Very, very, very good job. I wonder why you don't write professionally. Your ideas were refreshingly brilliant.

I really like this story from what I've read so far. The only thing is that you change tenses- from past to present sometimes in the same sentence. But it's great how you integrated your story with the plot of the Deathly Hallows. Young Severus is super hot too. Good job!

-LuvSeverus

Oops, sorry I just read your response to a review that basically said the same as mine... It's just a bit confusing to read everything in past and then read a sentence like this in present. "Hermione struggles to breathe regularly as Severus disengages them from each other. He pulls down her skirt almost tenderly and then closes his robes, tightening them." Maybe if you're trying to convey a specific character's thoughts you could try using either quotation marks or better yet italics. But still good job and great story, I can't wait to read more :)