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Wonderful gripping story. Gods, please, write more, more, more!

I love this! I'm totally hooked and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Another delicious chapter! Yum! :D

woah. 3 chappies in one day! that's amazing!!! and woah..the sexual tension..lol

Madietta- First, I would like to address the past & Present tenses to try to explain what I am doing there. It is intentional. Everything is in the past tense, was, were, etc... EXCEPT, for their thoughts. The thoughts are punctuated by - marks.

For example.

((Hermione WAS washing her face vigorously in the sink.

Hmm, interesting twist! I am anxious to see where you go with it. :D

Hi reirei,
the sexual torture by our skilled potion master in chapter 6 seems to be even more effective than the worst "Cruciatus".I think I would tell him my darkest secrets(HiHi...)I love your story so much,it's getting more and more mysterious as there's another one besides Hermione who is messing with the past.Actually Lily seems to have a crush on Frank Longbottem,that's why both Harry and Neville are feeling sick,because they never might have been born if the past isn't being changed quickly.I cannot wait to read more....LOL Sureves Epans

I like it. Please update soon.

oh man, this is a lot harder than she thought!! me too lol ^_^ i love this story! update soon!

ahh well lookit here! i barely blink and ya gotta whole slew of new chapters! bravo to the speedy updates, and ty for the longer chaps, pls keep it up. u've made this perv very happy indeed! now, moving from praise to other thoughts, things don't have to go EXACTLY the same as the first time around, just similar enough for everyone who exists in the future version1 to also exist in version2. the pre-existing couples must stay the same to preserve the next generation. but the rest is free to variation as i see it. i can't see snape getting outa brewing that potion, although would thathavbeen great. he has to SEEM a loyal servant long enough to align himself with albus and become a spy to play his part in the future. does mione hav to die? sev certainly can't, that would bugger up everything.(wouldnt it?) would mione's absence from harry's life change things for the worse or can some one effectively fill her place? like an idiot i've just noticed the angst warning? is bittersweet too much to hope for? can a story be full of angst and have a happy ending yet still b and angsty story? how bout a shakespearian tragic love? (though i do think if any1 deserves a lil love/happiness it's snape...but life isn't fair) however stories r better than life. (and sometimes fics help fix the unfairness of certain books) i hope you dont have this all figured out in your head, and r open to a little influence. sry 4 makin ya read all of this,got carried away, it's a compliment. update asap. >;)