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for Time lost. ...EPILOGUE UP!

by reirei

person Anonymous
schedule June 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Hi ReiRei,

 

Firstly I love your stories, long with intricate plots.

Two small things I have noticed, in chapter 5 I think it is (starts with the line about Hermione being cursed with easy tears) it says laboratory rather then lavatory and in chapter 7 when describing outfits for Lilly to wear to Hogsmeade you describe her hair as Titan (a form of giant) when I think you meant titian (based off a painter who loved painting red headed women)

Can't wait for the newest story to be done.

Thanks for the effort and time that goes into something that has provided me with much entertainment.

person Anon
schedule July 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was a very interesting story line.. there were a few punctuation errors and extra words that threw off the flow of the story, but over all it was different enough that you almost didn't notice. Now to see if you have any recent stuff..
person Merle
schedule August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I. Just. Wow...
schedule June 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really Great story well done!!! I am a hard core SS/HG shipper and I really loved this unique story!!!
schedule April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was such an amazing story! The epilogue was so cute:)
schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
loved the story xD though tbh it seemed like 2-3 stories crammed into one, i just loved it :p <3333 way to go!
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved it --- totally enjoyed reading this, thank you for writting it.
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little disturbed. If Hermione didn't show back up until 2014, then Snape should be around 55. And her body is still 16. I can handle a 20 year difference, but 40 is a bit much.
person Mia
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Easily one of the best stories I have ever read. Just thrilling, terrifying, desperately sad and angsty, but with a perfect ending. And I don't believe that I have ever read a better epilogue. Thank you so very much for sharing. I love you. I really do. You are awesome and beautiful and talented and I love you.

~Mia
person dinkyjew
schedule November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was an excellent read. time well spent thanks