rate_review Reviews

Whoa!!! Wait a minute!!! I wasn't trying to bludgeon you over the head
with a hammer when I made that last comment about the difficulty
in reading earlier pages. Far from it...

BUT, with older model computers, I don't know how newer ones handled
it, those '*******' going across the page made it hard to enjoy the story in
the beginning and you DO have an interesting story, make NO mistake
in that.

As for the inquiry about languages, it was meant as a simple question and
not meant to be demeaning to the author, BUT as a reader whose read this
whole story so far it made me wonder because I had NOTICED a few things.

Yes, I AM that reviewer who critiques a story and asks the serious
questions.

...or would you rather I hush and just sing praises about the story. :-)

Tell the truth, I can handle it.

Sooo need chapter 28!!! I think Hermione has already lost her marbles!

Hey. Ok i just read the whole story straight through and i can wait till u update I like it it's cool. Cant wait to find out what happens with Harry and Draco.

Oh and i loved the opening scene dat was cool.

-wince- Ron couldn't keep his mouth shut if it was buttoned close. He's gonna crack under pressure...that is if something isn't found out first to make it a moot point.

Oh and XD right back at you, thanks for another wonderful chapter.

so so good & addictive like potatoe chips 1 chappie is never enough

Hello. I just wanted to say that I LOVE your story!!! So much!!!!! Please update!! PLEASE!!!!! Anyway...great story!

Oh gosh!! your AMAZING!! Such a quick update! I was soooo happy when i decided to randomly check on this story... I have to admit, you have me to your advanntage... More Chapters=HAPPY HAPPY READERS!! :]

Excellent job. Thank you so much for updating once more. As for how Ron will get out of telling the truth about Harry while under the truth telling potion (I can't spell the name =^.^=;), I don't think that he'll have to. My guess is that he'll somehow be made to speak an unbreakable vow (through Hermnone), and the investigation will be for naught.

about #27...

Well, I have to ADMIT I'm starting to enjoy your story NOW from #20 & up...

Because of the simple fact, I have an old computer and your need to put these
'******' ALL the way across the bottom of the story was making the story VERY
hard to read....the constant moving the page back & forth made reading this an
extreme headache.

Needless to say, I'm starting to enjoy just sitting back and reading this without
any distractions.

I'm guessing you are not a native English speaker? Because of some of the grammmar I'm seeing...

Besides that, it IS an interesting story, but I must admit there are some elements
in this story that DOES remind me of another.

ummm....PLEASE WRITE MORE AND VERY QUICKLY!!! It took sooooo long for these to come out, i dont wanna wait like that again!! please...

this is the best story i have read in a long time!!

UPDATE!!