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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update soon I want to know if Harry is going to give in for Drac, or if stupid Ron (I realy dislike him especily after the epsode with Harry) is going to get in the way
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September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
""Dobby will not let Draco Malfoy hurt Harry Potter!" Came a shrill; unexpected cry from the other side of the counter, followed by various cooking utensils."
GO Dobby!! Hahaha! I'm always reading fics where Harry gets attacked at Hogwarts or something and I'm always wondering where the heck Dobby is while Harry's getting attacked. Helpless!Harry is fun sometimes but I've always wanted to read a veela fic where he's guarded like the crown jewels and pretty dangerous in his own right. So this is just awesome.
GO Dobby!! Hahaha! I'm always reading fics where Harry gets attacked at Hogwarts or something and I'm always wondering where the heck Dobby is while Harry's getting attacked. Helpless!Harry is fun sometimes but I've always wanted to read a veela fic where he's guarded like the crown jewels and pretty dangerous in his own right. So this is just awesome.
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September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really really really enjoy the way each character thinks and reacts so distinctly. There's no 'group collective' where they all think the same and agree on everything. There's individuality, everyone is perceiving what's going on differently and reacting differently. There are misunderstandings and conflict and good logic that isn't so great in practice and a bit of human irrationality that comes from thinking with your heart and not your brain.
Its such a subtle thing but its very hard to find in most stories.
Its such a subtle thing but its very hard to find in most stories.
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i still love that ron's dad did it XD
~eros
~eros
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September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still as good as the last time I reviewed. I hope there is more to come and VERY soon! it's getting interesting!
KCK-Lumcer
KCK-Lumcer
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this story. They need to stop taking it down!!!
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September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Where did the story go? lol
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, you know you can't leave it hanging there. Get on with the next chapter please...hai aku, onegai!
Constructive critisizm: Great story, fun interactions and situations, but your grammer and punctuation skills are on the poor side and need work. Still, it's easy to read in spite of the errors. Polishing it up with proper corrections would only make it better. Also, please refrain from extra-long *** lines that make the words stretch longer than the window can accomodate.
Thank you, and please hurry! :)
Constructive critisizm: Great story, fun interactions and situations, but your grammer and punctuation skills are on the poor side and need work. Still, it's easy to read in spite of the errors. Polishing it up with proper corrections would only make it better. Also, please refrain from extra-long *** lines that make the words stretch longer than the window can accomodate.
Thank you, and please hurry! :)
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I might not be to happy with Ron for betraying Harry with his secret, but I'm proud that he didn't snitch on Harry to Lucius even though Lucius still got the info he was after... but he still doesn't know where Harry is yet ^_~
please update chapter 30 soon ^_^
Jan
please update chapter 30 soon ^_^
Jan
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it great chater