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it's .. interesting ... but could you, maybe, put spaces in between?? it's kind of a bit hard to read .. well, for me, anyway .. my eyes go cross-eyed! ... try to make it longer, you know. describe harry's emotions throughout important incidents .. describe other people's reactions a bit more .. so you could give a bigger impact on your reader ... when i wrote my fic: 'Taint Me Not', a lot of people commented on how they liked the way i described my characters' emotion because it really struck a cord in them .. i've less reviews here, but in FF there's quite a few! ... well, then! i hope to read a new and better improved 'Harry and the Beast(s)'!!!

Don't worry about finishing this. It's terrible!

*On ch. 1*

Ooh, I like where this is going. I love it when Harry isn't human.
The stories are so much more interesting when he's a beast or creature of some sort.

why are the chapters so freakin' tiny!? I can read
them in like 5 minutes!
I love the story though. Just make the chapters longer,
I can stand them being so small.

update update now!!! so long as you have smex in every chapter i dont mind lol ... can you email me when you update? xoxo

Please hurry up! This is starting out as a good story.

wow that was so cool, please post again soon!

update soon pweez! also, in the summary, you said that there was going to be alot of pairings with harry, which is super awesome and sexy, but i just hope that 1- the story has a happy ending and 2- that whoever harry ends up being with it is true love and harry doesn't become some kind of whore (cause that would suck)

Running into the Forbidden forest toward a horny vampire?

good chapter, poor Harry *grins widely*