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by LillySnape

schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one. Please update again soon.
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww jeez, that was so beautiful (chapter 8) I mean, you knew she was going to go and muck it up with the hands of fire. Hehe.

It was such a lovely gesture, and you really took your time with it, I thoroughly enjoyed that chapter. Especially the ending. Keep up the good work.

~CC
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful chapter, i loved it...i like the anger and then the love that showed...
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I can't wait to read more. Please update again soon.
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I like how Hermione went to him and asked why he was avoiding her. I look forward to reading more.
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great new chapter...he should have helped her take a bath...that would have been errotic!
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chelleybelle-
I actually entertained that idea for quite some time, but then thought it would be a little too much, too soon. But don't worry...the smut will be here soon. :D
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I hope that Severus and Hermione can overcome their insecurities and become closer. I am glad that Bitsy is helping her until she gets better. I can't wait to read more. Please update again soon.
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schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cute! I bet Bitsey is going to "help" alot. :)