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for Just Pretend

by unknown001397

person Tenar10r
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chawauwau = chihuahua

This is so cute I love this story!
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person luvhp
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww, this is good, keep it up.
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person luvhp
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, Lucius is now in the mix. Aww, did he have to say those hurtful things to her?
Doing a great job, keep it up.
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm guessing he was saying all of those terrible things to her either for blaise's benefit or because of his father? update soon!!
person iluv2dance
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh!!! Awesome! Nice work!! Out in the open...almost! Can't wait for more!
person Verie
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great Story.
A little polishing would do.
But, love the plot.

Keep going. :]

Verie
person Camryn
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like ur story, u should check on your spelling though...
person luvhp
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Keep going.

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