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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry, but the grammatical errors in this have me scratching my head. It's very confusing trying to understand what is going on.
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter,a lthough there were alot of grammatical errors in this chapter for some reason.
Otherwise, WOW< what happened to Hermione??
Otherwise, WOW< what happened to Hermione??
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, so what did draco get hermione?! i can't wait to see!!!
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay yikes! can't wait to hear about what was going through his head as he watched that--lots of people freeze up in emergency situations like that...
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
your story has great promise...i like the idea of it and i am looking forward to seeing where it is going...i think that you need a beta though...your grammar is a bit off and there are some spelling errors. don't let this upset you, the story itself is still great, and a beta can only make it better.
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter...i like the pink hair at the end...the kissing scenes were great, i can imagine what everyone around hogwarts is thinking with those two making out...poor ron, he got what he deserved, didn't he?
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh...naked hermione...what will draco do next?
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor draco is smitten and hermioine is not sure of her feelings...good chapter...i liked the sex scene...at least the one sided sex scene, lol
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update! :)