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for Just Pretend

by unknown001397

person kazfeist
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hopefully, we'll find out the whole story, now. Wonder if Harry was taken over by Voldemort? :D
person Smartgirl13w
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just wanna let you know that so far, I love this story! I am only on "Just Wash It," but it's looking good!
BUT, just so you have bra sizes correct, I'm not a specialist or anything, but I know Hermione Granger would NEVER be a 38 ANYTHING unless she doubled her body weight. She would be a 32-34. If you are trying to get the point across that she now has some rather substantial breastage going on, 34D would be right. But a 38C would give her a much larger midriff, and a seemingly smaller chest.
Not trying to be creepy, I'm a married woman, I just thought I'd let you know!
person DB1
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@26 awesome story, update soon

*DB*
person kazfeist
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So! Either it wasn't Harry (Polyjuice), or it was, and Voldie was somehow controlling him, eh? Can't wait to find out which! :D
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok i'm confused it's Supposed that Harry did it
but HE doesn't have a clue of what its going on, so if it wasn't
Harry who did it?....Jane sweet kid it reminds me to plan thme when I
hit the thirties (ahhh bliss I'm 18 yet), but she stole my heart well what else
ummm nothing much for now, Please UPDATE soon I beg you

take care
Lola

ps:Jessica and Blaise, WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT? O_o
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL. the visualization of Draco with a sticky note to his head is hilarious.
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very very good. can't wait till the next chapter. let me know when it comes out.
schedule January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MORE PLEASE I BEG YOU
PLEASE
update soon
take care
^_^

Lola
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person mhaj78
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love that you're updating so quickly!! I can't wait to see how Draco finds out it was Harry...does Hermione remember that it was him? Or does she try to protect him? I love to see the friendship between BZ and DM...how he's okay with DM taking his anger out on him and that he knows it isn't personal. Great character development!