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July 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I had to read the first chapter about 15 times before I was able to get all the information from it. Unfortunately, I will not be reading the second chapter despite how good the first chapter was. Purely due to the fact that it's all essentially one run on sentence, if you could please break the first chapter down into paragraphs to make it easier to read I might consider re-reading your story .
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March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
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February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Poor Hermione! Poor Draco! Poor Blaise!!!
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April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy the story and I'm not trying to flame you or anything but you do realize that england doesn't do the whole Santa thing right? Keep up with the awesome story!!
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April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nooo....poor hermione...poor draco.....her better not do anything stupid...
love this chappie can't wait for more :)
love this chappie can't wait for more :)
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April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the story, and in the first few chapters your grammar was excellent. However, after chapter seven your grammar took a turn. A bad one. Do you have a Beta reader, if you don't I proofread fairly well, at least that's what my friends tell me, and I wouldn't mind doing this for your stories...
But other wise I enjoyed your story, of hat I have read so far at least. Continue the great writing!
But other wise I enjoyed your story, of hat I have read so far at least. Continue the great writing!
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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ciao bella =] Come stai?
Fucking great story!! I was so shocked when Harry raped Hermione! I thought that he was taking her the show her when he was gunnah propose to Ginny or something..!
Really good story! xPP
There's quite a few mistake with grammar but not many with spelling. But the story line so makes up for it x]]
- Muse
Fucking great story!! I was so shocked when Harry raped Hermione! I thought that he was taking her the show her when he was gunnah propose to Ginny or something..!
Really good story! xPP
There's quite a few mistake with grammar but not many with spelling. But the story line so makes up for it x]]
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March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omfg.. I think [probably wrongly] that i just figured out what Lucius' plan was.. Did Lucius put Harry under the Imperius Curse and tell him to rape Hermione? Or did someone take Polyjuice Potion to make them look like Harry? If i'm right and they did then that's harsh news..
- Muse
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