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for A Mark of You and Me

by SuishouTenshi

person Kayo
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. I read this in Calculus class. If I hadn't I might have started crying. As it was, my heart was throbbing in certain parts, and I mean that quite literally. Oh, but it was exquisitely painful and remarkably good. Part of me wants a happy ending (and every time I reread it I will probably hope I was delusional the first time and misread it), but I can't say I don't like the sad one because I love it. Absolutely frigging love it. One of the scenes that I loved the most was Draco and Harry up on the rooftop...the kiss and explanation. Then, for a moment, (alright until it didn't happen) I thought Draco was going to kill Harry in some kind of revenge/if-I-can't-have-him-then-nobody-can kind of thing. So, wonderful work, and I'm so glad you stuck to the non-Disney version. Please keep up the wonderful work! I am going to check out your other stories now...
person Camilla
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loooved this story. Please write a sequel where Harry finds out it was Draco who saved him. And maybe bring Draco back.
person Sirene
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that made me cry, a lot. But thank you for not straying from the original storyline. Even though it was very upsetting, it was great
person rosiel
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn you!! you made me cry ToT
person Dezra
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a horrible ending. Evil.
person loving
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was sad at the end but I want more, maybe seeing harry's reaction to everything. Or maybe draco falling into something new that isn't death.
person love56
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
can you like right what happens afterwards? like what happens after harry finds out about draco?
thanks you!
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I keep hoping every time I read this that Harry will save him. That things will be different. Oh Draco!
person Aruabei
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You made me cry... shame on you! However... I really adore(love! love!) this story. I usually prefer 'happy ending' but this ending stay true to the original and it make the story seem more complete than any other endings would. You're a wonderful writer, so creative and original! x3
person NightLo
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So...would there be after life? Or life after that? As Draco died so tragically, would Snape and Narcissa help him?