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August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I see that I'm the first to give you a review in a while. That shatters all hope I have of getting one now.
But I should give you my review not moan about my stories.
I'm going to be doing this backwards since I wanted to see if the story was finished or not first.
This chapter wasn't so bad. I question why the bird bit him. I've had issues with his voice for the whole story. I understand the 'inner voice' thing, but it's so far from truly acting like it's him that I question it and consider it a detraction. Maybe it was the tone you gave it. It was almost acting like a bully pretending to be his friend.
I was hoping to find out what on earth his father was up to with 'giving him' to Krum.
But I should give you my review not moan about my stories.
I'm going to be doing this backwards since I wanted to see if the story was finished or not first.
This chapter wasn't so bad. I question why the bird bit him. I've had issues with his voice for the whole story. I understand the 'inner voice' thing, but it's so far from truly acting like it's him that I question it and consider it a detraction. Maybe it was the tone you gave it. It was almost acting like a bully pretending to be his friend.
I was hoping to find out what on earth his father was up to with 'giving him' to Krum.
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August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I talked about the bird in last review without realizing I went too far back.
In this chapter I was happy to see that he no longer saw Harry as some kind of punishment, retaliation to Draco trying to kill him, or something so unwanted, that they were nightmares instead of dreams he wanted to dream.
I think that's it for this chapter.
In this chapter I was happy to see that he no longer saw Harry as some kind of punishment, retaliation to Draco trying to kill him, or something so unwanted, that they were nightmares instead of dreams he wanted to dream.
I think that's it for this chapter.
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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting development, can't wait to see what's to happen next!
Please update chapter 8 soon ^_^
Jan
Please update chapter 8 soon ^_^
Jan
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love a submissive Draco! Have never read a Draco/Krum before...this should be interesting!
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch2 was good...although I can't see how it's going to lead to Harry! You are ze mistress of ze cleefhanger, yes? (or master...whichever) Accents are a lot of fun. You do a pretty good job with Krum's; just watch out for missing words! Sometimes that works with the accent thing, sometimes not. Okay, on to Ch3!
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do like it.
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well at least he admits he wants Harry! I sooo need chapter 8!!!
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it. Hope there will be more
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Definately not a corny chapter. It was very good. I wonder why Draco is having all these dreams about Harry...Interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter. Good work.
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October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting! I am very curious as to what is going on with Draco and his dream/visions? I mean the first time he had one, though it was Harry he saw, it wasn't his voice, yet he also saw him in the bathroom; but this time, he didn't know who it was, he recognize the voice, though he couldn't pin point it, to whom it belonged to, which ended up being the real Harry.
Was it a trick from both Lucius and Voldemort?....
I can't wait to what happens next. Please update chapter 6 soon. ^_^
Was it a trick from both Lucius and Voldemort?....
I can't wait to what happens next. Please update chapter 6 soon. ^_^