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by LostPetunia

schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am still trying to figure out what the heck that was. It was interesting to say the least. Keep up the good work.

kat
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ouch! Harry isn't going to be able to sit or lay down if he doesn't heal that! Master? So he was late on purpose?
person ZooArmy
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love your style of writing!!! It's amazing and something entirely different than I know.

One tiny thing so... 18 times 60 is 1080. NOT 1180.
person NightLo
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is this an act or an arrangement? And how does Draco feel in this?
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like how you as the narrator were so mean to him, it made me laugh. And I like the time thingy, 1860 seconds????I don't know. Good story though.
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice!!
person Risei
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm..I really like the way this was written. The 1st person narrative really suits the story, although the characterization is a bit off. Well done though. ^^
person yuneek
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
o__o I was doing good up to the part where Draco starts cutting him. I've never been good with that kind of stuff XP But I think it was well written! I enjoyed it :)