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for Trap Door

by ZooArmy

schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Fam! Get back to the writing of this story!!! I need more and withdrawl is NOT fun! *giggles* Please!
person sazbaker
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is really good. i love the story line and that Harry thinks that Draco will make fun of him! What will Draco have to do! i hope you update soon, i'll be waiting! xx
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DAMNIT HARRY! Just let him do you already! Stop being a baby! HAHAHAHAHA! That was awesome! Im just kidding! I like hhow Harry is not a slut! He's being virtuous and Draco is being.....Draco. Thanks for the update!
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so cute!
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Harry! He's having a hard time with this! At least Draco is trying! I sooo need chapter 6!
person NightLo
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually I would suggest you add a little bit more warnings: OOC (as some may find this Harry too cute) and wonderful intense wet dream!!! I love the dream created specially for Draco...oh~~~~ that is the ultimate wet dream for Harry-lover...you know, constant wet dreams like these would kill even a young teenage from huge blood loss...

And does Harry hear anything about Draco's dream? And if...just if...Harry knows about the dream, what will his reaction be...

schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 5!
person kalaway
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting story. true you need a beta, but it certainly doesn't ruin the story--it's completely understandable. keep it up! :)
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome awesome awesome! Please keep going! Harry is soooo cute! And draco...so cocky (pun intended!) Update soon love! *kiss*
person Pheonix
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
your english is just fine. keep up the great work!