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for Past Love Renewed

by Vampirezdarkgurl

schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWW::WIPES TEAR::I LOVVEDDD IT!!!!!!!You asked aboput Mpreg and my answer is ....YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THAT!!!!!::smirks:: loved it and can't wait for the sequel. now I gotta take care of one sick little brother>::sighs:: sometimes i wonder who the real motherris here.....mumble mumble mumlble ....i take care of him not mum,,....mumbling and grumbling........should just leave.....::sigh::
loved the story!
Ja
Sakura Maxwell-Minamino
person Raven
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, to bad it's over. Oh well, loved the story! Great lemons. Bellabitch got what she deserved and Imhotep is now a wizard! I'm glad that it ended up with a happy ending. To bad there won't be a sequel for it.
person Dana
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so cool! Are you going to do a sequel cause i'd love to read it?
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The lemon was great.
person alma
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter! beautiful love scene.
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was a great chapter and i cant wait to find out what you are doing. you did great on the lemon. you couldn't tell that it was your first
person alma
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter!!!! totally love mpreg!!!
person Raven
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
At least the bitch is taken care of. I hope that she gets the kiss. Poor Imhotep. Oh well if he does die they can always use the book of the dead and bring him back like they did Evy in the second movie. Though I don't get how a stab in the chest could even hurt him. After all in the second movie he got his arm ripped off and acted like it didn't even hurt. To bad the story is almost over I really enjoyed it.
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES! As long as Imhotep don't die.
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is so good but i cant figure out what you are doing.cant wait to find out though. and yes to mpreg