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May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The basic plot seems to be alright, but there doesn't seem to be a lot of detail to go along with it. The grammar and punctuation was alright as well, but the wording lacks fluidity. If you need someone to Beta for you, I would be happy to take a look.
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, i have only read up to Chapte 11 so far, and i think its awesome. I wanted to thank you for putting the link to the story on Harry Potter Crossover Collection, although i did edit the post so that it had the same layout as the other posts in the site. Thanks so much for posting the link though, not many people have being posting links on the site.
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, i just finished it, excellent! I loved it. I was disappointed Remus wasn't in this more though, but his reaction to them being married was priceless! -smiles-
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what about nefertiri?? .. is she gonna be included? ... well, i'll just have to find out, don't i? .. it's an interesting fic .. good job on it!
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAAGGGHH!! What a beautiful story!! I enjoyed reading it so much and now it's over!! Well I saw the sequel was out so now I'm going to go check that one out. Thanks for writing such an amazing story!!
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just loved your story. I can't wait for the sequel. I've been following this from the beginning and I love the way you wrote it and the different spin that you put into the story. AWESOME!
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So you decided to make a sequel? I thought that you said that you weren't going to? Oh well, I'm looking forward to it. I didn't catch the last sentence that said you were going to continue it but I'm glad that you are. I hope it comes out soon. Will it continue onto the second movie?
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Cries* It's over!
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November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was so good i am looking forward to reading the next one. good luck with it, smile you have finished a story
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November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The fiction was wonderful, will you make a Sequel based on the mummy return???