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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story! I hope that you continue writing the updates quickly!
Hope to hear from you soon.
Hope to hear from you soon.
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I really like this story. I'm enjoying the way you are leading Dumbledore on a goose chase.
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the storyline so far. Very different from any other story I've read and I love your writing. Can't wait to read more!
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a seriously good concept for a story. i am reallllly interested to see how things are going to change. please do not stop. aweeesome job. it takes alot to catch my attention and this caught me instantly
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All in all a very enjoyable read. I love the "what if" stories and this one reads like a visit from an old friend, or gang, if you will.
I look forward to the new future you've envisioned for our favorite hero(s). Will things be sunny and rosey or will "the Butterfly Effect" come into play?
After all, terrible things happen to those who meddle in time. . .
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I look forward to the new future you've envisioned for our favorite hero(s). Will things be sunny and rosey or will "the Butterfly Effect" come into play?
After all, terrible things happen to those who meddle in time. . .
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I could feel the "rushed" tone of their situation as my mind worked to guess where you are going with this. Thanks for the updates.
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hurry and update, im hooked! i can't wait to see what happens in the future!
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October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lets see how the potters do with killing voldemort
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October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting idea you have.
My knee jerk reaction is...woah, that's was way to much information for Harry to give out. Especially to the Weasley's if there is a change in the future. With the amount of "meddling" (for lack of a better word) Harry did, I'm thinking that there are quiet a few paradoxes. First one that comes to mind, is Voldemort decides it wasn't Harry after all and goes for Neville.
There are two routes here, you can show Harry and Hermione growing up together (in an almost Lilly / Snape way). Plenty to explore as James endeavours to destroy the Horcruxes with Sirius and Remus. I'd read.
The other is, Harry back in the future, and all hell has broken loose. Again the paradoxes could be extreme. So many different things to explore, either positive or negative.
Good luck with whatever you decide.
My knee jerk reaction is...woah, that's was way to much information for Harry to give out. Especially to the Weasley's if there is a change in the future. With the amount of "meddling" (for lack of a better word) Harry did, I'm thinking that there are quiet a few paradoxes. First one that comes to mind, is Voldemort decides it wasn't Harry after all and goes for Neville.
There are two routes here, you can show Harry and Hermione growing up together (in an almost Lilly / Snape way). Plenty to explore as James endeavours to destroy the Horcruxes with Sirius and Remus. I'd read.
The other is, Harry back in the future, and all hell has broken loose. Again the paradoxes could be extreme. So many different things to explore, either positive or negative.
Good luck with whatever you decide.
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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i dont think harry should remember his "old" life, you should do a few chapters mentioning the Potters moving and living close to the Grangers, a little of horcruxes and Harrys childhood (with Hermione if possible making them best friends before they go to hogwarts) and finaly a quick rewrite of the books (at least until voldie is dead) and a epilogue...
at least thats how i imagine, rewriting the books will be hard unless you make voldie die (not for good) at halloween so that the rewrite wont be as demanding and more or less cannon..
but its your choice and i'll be waiting for the remaining of this amazing story
update soon!!!
PS: harry would have to come back in time sometime to do what his (other self?) did warning his parents and the Grangers and if harry has no memory of that his parents would have to tell him to do it
(messing with the time gives me headaches, bloody temporal mechanics!!)
at least thats how i imagine, rewriting the books will be hard unless you make voldie die (not for good) at halloween so that the rewrite wont be as demanding and more or less cannon..
but its your choice and i'll be waiting for the remaining of this amazing story
update soon!!!
PS: harry would have to come back in time sometime to do what his (other self?) did warning his parents and the Grangers and if harry has no memory of that his parents would have to tell him to do it
(messing with the time gives me headaches, bloody temporal mechanics!!)