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I liked this. While it was sad that Sirius and James died, I am an avid Severus fan and love it when someone makes sure he gets happy too. (Besides, Violet is adorable:-)).
Update again soon!!!

I like this. It is a good take on the time traveling. I really enjoy it. I'm sorry that James and Sirius had to die, but I think it fits with your story.

Even if you killed James and Sirius I still love reading this story because harry and hermione got together in the future. this is what is all about right, harry & hermione 4eva! I love your writing as well. keep up the good work. can't wait to read what'll happen to harry and hermione. and the other changes that happened.

good story!

Well, I wish that you hadn't killed James - I like Severus, but I think that he could have had another lady. I loved the memories though. Harry and Hermione's courtship was cool. Great job.

Interesting. I was under the impression you were going to write about the changes Harry made with his time travel in greater detail rather than summarise. I hope you plan to expand on your very clever ideas. Thanks for the update.

This is a very good story.... up till now it has had me on the edge of my seat.... keep up the good work.

Okay I understand that Snape did go through alot in the books but come on, killing James and Sirius and replacing them with Snape doesn't work well. You could have made James and Sirius befriend Snape and Lilly could have set him up and he could have fell in love with someone else but not Lilly. I really don't like that about this chapter. I also don't like the total Dumbledore bashing, he was a good guy, he wouldn't have schemed the way you wrote him. And where is Luna in all of this she was a big part of the books she shouldn't written out. I do like that Draco turned sides but I don't think Lucius would have until the very end to save his skin. I like that Harry remembers both worlds and I like how he is with Hermione but I would have liked them to have at least one other relationship before realizing that they like each other. Ron and Pansy I'm not exactly sure about, Ginny and Draco was sort of obvious. I just can't gt over James and Sirius dying I don't like that at all. And I don't like out you have Harry thinking of Snape as his dad so soon I mean I'm assuming he is in his 7th year and his mom got married in his 5th year that's not exactly enough time to think of someone as a father. And I'm not so sure Lilly would have remarried James was the love of her life. Also where's Remus He should defiantly be in this story. It kinda seems like you wrote him out completely. Well anyway I'll keep reading to find out what happens but this is not on my favorites list.

i LOVE this story! :0 so creative and just awesome.
I'm glad Lilly and Snape are together and the house unity! Please keep going with this!

I've never been a 'snape' fan, but the way you've written it has made me reconsider any negative thoughts on the plot twist. It's actually really good and i'm looking forward to reading more. Thanks for writing.