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Man! I actually started tearing up at some points Really good fic! And I think it was a nice twist that you had James die...some sacrifices still had to be made. all in all awesome fic!

Nice transition chapter.

phew!, i finally got through it all, man you are an awesome story writer i just loved the whole lot, i reckon you could become a professional author, maybe even send the story to JKR for her to look over, Gratz on such a good story!!!, Joel

I have no issues with the Severus / Lily. Severus has a dramatic personality change, I would have liked to see him stay snarky. I quite enjoy the idea that Lily and Severus have a child together. There was one line that made me cringe. Lily saying that she needed to forget James, I think that could have been put a different way.

I like the story and the big changes to the future you've presented and look forward to reading more as you have time.

Thanks!

Muffy,
sometimes when someone very close to you dies, you need to forget them for awhile so that you can heal. in your heart you never really forget them, but in order to be able to go on, you have to forget...i had a spouse die, and i know what it is like to have to move on and put the past behind you... if you dwell and continue to live in your memories you will never be whole...sometimes the only way to remember the good without feeling so much pain and dispair is to just forget for a while. eventually you can remember again and then you can remember the joy of living and not the sorrow of dying.

lovin the story

keep it up

that was so great. are you going to keep going and talk about the past more? where is this story going to go?

Jst read all of this harry potter fan fic from start to finish tonight loved it and look forward to hearing more about how harry rocked his own world out of its foundations and want to hear more about the differences and how he addapts to his new life ect.

GREAT WORK Wouldnt change a thing and i think u put a whole new out look on how ive veiwed the harry potter series and uve brought new ideas to light for me.

For this i thank you
I dont no when you wrote this or if u still read reveiws But if you do i look forward to a reply myself
from Hendy
PS Excuse my gramma

Nice story... but I fell like either the ending is near or that that was the ending o.o;;;;

Also... you skipped through the memories so fast... could you make it more in-depth?

I like it but i dont care too much about the Ginny Draco pairing.