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Lily's actions are illogical.  She knew that James had contacted Sirius and Remus and was waiting for them to arrive.  She would not have disappeared at that point in time, at least not without telling James who was just downstairs.  Looks like it could be a good story though, please notify me of updates.

Another excellent story!

personally i liked all the stories before but this one helped me stop you dont have common sense imagine your mother as wife of your fathers enemy dumb fuck kill yourself

The premise is quite appealing! I feel, however, the last few "flash-forward" chapters, of which Harry tried to recall and reconcile new memories and old memories, are a bit rushed. Those new memories could have been further elaborated with more emotion attached. But then I suppose it would be a slightly different story.

Excellent so far. I find myself reading as though they are speaking like there is no time left to make things right. You make it that easy to become involved with your characters. I hope that if they are saved that it does not mean that Severus will stay bad and end up dying as a deatheater. p

Thank you. You made me very happy by having Hermione end up with Harry. It was bothering me early on in your story when she was paired with Ron. I just don't like them together and the obvious affection and loyalty that flowed between she and Harry made Ron seem even worse as a love interest. Also, having Severus "get the girl" and allowing his real, non-bitter personality show is great. You have made me nervous about Hermione though...please don't let anything happen to her. p

re your A/N: I don't know about the Potters being able to protect Harry from Dumbledore as when you think about it, no one seemed willing to go against him. Even Sirius, a rebel to the end, did his bidding to a point. After Harry's warning, they may have sent him to another school or one of them insisted on going to work at the school so that they could watch out for him. I hope he does not dwell on what he has changed (ie. Ron and Hermione) that he feels robbed someone of what they should have had. Instead, he should dwell on the fact that Violet would not be, and many more would have died had he not made the difference by going back. love it. p

Very nice! You scared me at the end of the last chapter. Harry should stop and think. Remus would have been dead, the giants were on the side of the dark and killed untold numbers during the final battle, he did NOT kill Peter Pettigrew, etc. One can hope that some day when he looks back on his lists, he will realize that there were changes, but he really does not know which was the one that was "meant to be". Was he meant to go back so that lives could be put back on the right track or was the first memory the right track. I choose the first as it may have been necessary for some reason that he knew what his life would be like if fate lined up against him OR someone else may have done something that they were not meant to do, and it got Harry's life off track, which was fixed when he went back, etc. A great read. Thanks for sharing. p

Enjoyed your story. A few grammar and spelling errors, but basically well written with an interesting story line. Although I am not a fan of Severus Snape, the way you handled it made it seem logical and somewhat in line with canon. And of course I always enjoy seeing Harry end up with Hermione, especially when it doesn't slam Ron and/or Ginny.

I really love your story. I would love to see it as the real ending to Harry Potter. It makes alot more sence then how the real series ended. I am also glad you didn't make it so everything turned out rose colored. If you ever become a writer let me know I will be glad to read your books.