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JLynn you are the Jewel of my life! Seriously... I told you this story was amazing! I'm so proud of you for posting it! Also, after rereading the chap you e-mailed me, I dreampt about your story last night. I know, disturbing. I had to wait till I killed off Neville, but now I have bunches of thoughts for your giggling review. I'll e-mail you tonight.

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omg!!!! i love this story!!! keep it up ^^

Really good first chapter. I love stories where Draco is the submissive one and Harry gets a chance to play a more dominant role. Keep up the good work. Next chapter. please. :)

LOl this was so funny ^^ Looking forward to the next chapter =)Loved the beautiful blonde boy part :P

Cute, very cute. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I think it's great. You might want to explain why Draco is the only boy and is he the only boy at the school. If he is the only one in the whole school, you may want to tell why they took a boy into a girls's school. You could have there be more boys at the school, but he is top student, so he got to come on the trip.

Well, I am very biased, since I pretty much adore any tale with a feminine Draco, or at least a Draco who is very comfortable with his sexuality, and this story seems to have that in abundance! Having admitted my bias on the subject, I can now move to actually reviewing.

I really like it ;-) First, you have very good grammar and spelling, which makes any story better. There are a few sentences I might have structured differently to make them flow easily, but nothing significant that I would have changed.

You laid the groundwork for the story well, making tidbits of background available for us, while teasing us with what may come later in a way that doesn't give away anything but the enjoyable fact that Harry wants Draco...and vice versa. This is a situation we can live with ;-)

For a first fanfic, this is really impressive (especially since my first one needed three months of back editing before I could stop cringing with shame!)

Please keep up with this one...I look forward to what comes next! Peace and Love, Samayel

awe so ccute!

Ooh, Draco in Beauxbatons Blue! I like!

Can't wait for the next part. This is yummy!

love the fic! can you pretty, pretty please add me to the mailing list when you update ^_^