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for A Love So Belated

by slashpervert

schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yo! Is this gonna wind up being DH compliant? Because if this is just a brief intelude teaser to explain the sucky conclusion that was J.K.'s epilogue, then I don't want to get my hopes up. You're really drawing out the angst and build up....I'm so scared for Draco. I wonder how George can put two and two together and Ron can't...I can't wait to see/hear Ron's reaction. I do feel sorry for Ginny but she's chasing a man who isn't into her anymore, she's gotta wise up. Be brave Harry!! Maybe I've been too hard on Harry though because Draco hasn't told his daddy about Harry yet, so I guess both of them have some confessions to make...shaking in my boots til your next update!
person KittenCeleste
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really, really, really loving this story. So full of ups, downs, a sprinkle of fluff and a healthy dose of Ye Olde Angst. I go from wanting to kick Harry's behind and make him fess up to Ginny, to making huge kitten eyes at the screen reading about the more tender moments between our fav Gruesome Twosome.

Thanks for the regular and quick updates!
Keep up the god work dear, we're all here rooting for you. ^^
person misslala
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, Harry's in some serious hot water, especially if George noticed it. Hrm. Can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God, this chapter was making me so antsy. Harry really has to tell Ginny and break up with her. I thought I was going to scream, Ginny is trying to kiss Harry and feel him up, he really should of told her that he was in love with someone else. Can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i feel a little sick to my stomach now. this is not going to be good. something is about to go horrifyingly wrong....PLEASE UPDATE!!!
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the way this chapter ended on a slightly humorous note, with all the uptight air. Yet, there is drama awaiting our budding couple I suppose. A treat this story is.
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 25! Harry needs to end things with Ginny! How can he stand to treat Draco like this!
person NightLo
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well...this is a war field then, but lucky that Teddy is around, and people would be much nicer than it should be...

Ginny, you are really very very annoying, could you move out of the picture soon???
person misslala
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What an awkward Christmas! Draco's doing well enough. I'm curious if he and George will end up talking a bit? Maybe their separation will bring them together as friends?

Can't wait until everyone leaves. I want to know what they got for one another! LOL
person Answers
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man i hate everyone in that room for the way they treat Draco. Seriously, so what if he was a bit bitchy when he was a kid? Who wasn't? Like their freaking angels, and that they so easily shrug off the fact that they *beat* him. Under no circumstance other then active self defence is that okay. They choose to find him and kick the crap out of him, and then they sit there and act so high and mighty, like he should be honoured to be in their presence. It just shits me aye.

And Draco takes it, humbly out of respect for Harry. I get that hes not perfect either, but hes so much better then them right now because of the way their treating him. They judge him by the actions of his father - its so stupid. Their seperate individuals, and he's changed so much form who he used to be. I think though he should really make an effort to be friends with them, even if they keep rejecting him. I think he will because he loves Harry so much. But man, if that was me i would find it so hard not to slam them verbally, and to be in the same room as Ginny, and watch her and Harry together.

Anyway, as you can probably tell, i really like your story, the complexity of plot and characters. I appreciate the relucatance Harry has to part with Ginny, because shes security and acceptance and is the gateway to a family that hes never before had. And then he's intense passion for Draco, the addiction and attraction- and how loney they are when their not together. And i get why Draco stays with him even though no-one can know, because when you love someone, you'd do whatever you can to make them happy, and you take whatever you can. But he has to realise that living life hidden away in shame is not healthy- and i wish he'd recognise his own worth, and just go out there and change peoples perceptions of him and find a job that he loves that doesn't involve him by himself all the time. He's witty and smart, and no one seems to get that! grrrr.

Sorry for the really long rambling review, but i think your story is awesome, i totally love Draco and Harry (though Harry's selfishness pissess me off sometimes) and i'm really looking forward to the next chapter! btw i love how quickly you update, brightens my whole day.

:] thanks kid