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for A Love So Belated

by slashpervert

schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooooh. this is VERY VERY VERY bad.... (sorry if you actually knew me you might be laughing right now) great chapter. I wonder why Ginny covered for him? Maybe she thought that it was his deal to tell everyone about draco, maybe she couldn't handle talking about it....maybe she's plotting. I don't know....hmmmm....
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Harry! Ginny protected him. Draco needs to come and take care of him. Sooo need chapter 31!
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow...I was reading this chapter like this ::scroll, pause, hold breath...scroll, re-read the last line, pause, scroll down:: it seemed so realistic and intense...I'm surprised Ginny didn't tell them everything but I guess that's embarassing in a way for her. That last remark Ron said about arseholes would have been really funny if it wasn't meant to be really hurtful. So now we'll see the fall out with the rest of the Weasley I guess...I'm dreading the chapters when Lucius and the daily prophet find out...you guys are doing a really great job with this story!
person Melagic
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I'm loving it. I do hope that Ron and Harry make up though. And I have to tell you, your excessive use of profanity, mainly the word "fuck", in all the sex scenes kind of cracks me up. :) Thanks for continually updating too! I will be continually reading.
person misslala
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm interested to see how all of this comes to ahead. Should be brutal once Lucius finds out. I can't imagine he'll be too happy.
person NightLo
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey...Mrs. Black is actually enjoying one of the fantastic views out of the century!!! She really should SPREAD this news around and enjoy her status of FREE fantastic show....BTW, what would Kreacher say if he finds out that his master is enjoying great sex in front of his ADMIRED mistress???

For Narcissa, well, she really is a loving mother, she just cares too much for Draco, as our mothers do!!!

Though I don't like Ginny much, but what is she doing? And what is George doing? Hermione???
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooo..I think I know where you're going with this whole Teddy thing...at least, I hope it goes the way I'm wishing it would go..lol. harry and draco fuck everyday? I'm so jealous! Narcissa is really cool in this story, I like the way you portray her...I can't wait to see Ron's reaction, he can't know yet or he would have definitely come over right?
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, what can I say? You have done a great job with this story so far. I find myself waiting with baiting breath daily for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!

While I have your attention, I want to take a moment to tell you how much I like your
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Narcissa...she'll get over it someday. Harry and Draco are so in love its disgusting!.....I love it! SO when does the family find out?
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I'm wondering where the story will go now.
The action is always a treat though.