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i just finished reading the story and i have to say once again i have fallen in love with harry and draco all over again. i dont know how you do it but you capture me in your storys and i am stuck infront of my computer for 2 days read hoping that it never ends. cant wait to read and review the rest of your storys.

okay, this is just to let youi know, and no offence intended but in every chapter there is a sex scence. Not that I dont love yaoi but there really is not backing to the story except before the sex. If there is any possible way to go through the story with slightly less sex then the story would have a deeper emphasis to the relationship between Draco and Harry. Also, kudos for adding Seamus as being gay. Its a surprise, I figured it was Dean or Ernie. Anyways, just letting you know how I feel the story is going, besides the many many many sex scences it is a good story.

Good story, brilliant editing, smooth language and writing style. The only problems I would have is that the story kind of lost some its tension with the continual sex scenes. Not that I didn't enjoy them because I REALLY did! But towards the end I found myself skipping them in order to get on with the story, a kind of oh not again philosaphy. perhaps if the sex were every other chapter? Apart from that brilliant and very kinky, not especially nail biting a little to fluffy but really nice.

*Crimson Regret

Woah.... there's a lot of shagging in this story except for the end, for obvious reasons.
I liked the story though.... very much. =)
I'm going to start with the second part tomorrow. ^^

Okay, 2 things...

1. I absolutely ADORED #7, I loved reading the freedom of them just playing Quidditch by themselves, BUT I loved the scene when Harry tries to catch Draco..and does.

I'm a 'closet-romantic' so fluff like that makes me giddy inside.

2. I'm GLAD...even though it took 10 years for you guys to do it..that Harry
FINALLY grew some balls & broke up with Ginny. I SWEAR I felt like
getting a stick so I could chase Harry around with it while yelling 'JUST
TELL HER DAMN IT!!!' :-)

this was a very very very good story but
a little to much sex sometimes but everythinghels was super
keep going and post soon
bye bye

God, that was so good. Just loved every last bit!

This is seriously the best H/D fiction I have ever read, and I've read a lot. This kept my attention completely throughout the whole thing. WOW!! I could feel their frustration, their joy, their sadness and OMG their love was amazing! I don't think I've ever read something where Harry and Draco's connection is just so THERE. You've definitely got something here. Definitely. You and your co-author need to never stop writing together if this is what comes of it. Just wow. I'm in awe from the emotions shown in this. Not to mention the dialog is just too good. It's so real- the reactions. It doesn't feel planned or anything. And wow, being able to do those last few scenes with the realism and grace you guys did was wonderful. Heartbreaking, but lovely and gorgeous story telling. And I'm rambling now. AMAZING!!! ^________^ <3 *off to read what you have posted of the sequel*

Thanks for updating the story! It was awful how Draco ended up being assaulted both physically and sexually by those nasty Lestranges, and sweet how Harry asked Draco to marry him no matter that. Looking forward to the next part of their lives as they try to overcome that tragedy and move forward together.

Re: Chapters 9-12
I didn't know I could feel such a range of emotions in such a short amount of time. But I did enjoy the reading, and it was good to see the plot development without much piss-farting around. Please, don't use the word Merlin so much. Out of tezt, it reads really badly. Good job.