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SEXY STORY! you definately don't need help with the sex scenes, and i have a few ideas fort he rest. how about, he got the letter when he was 15 because his mom was veela and dad was incubus. as such, the combined sexual creature inheritance made him come into his early. also, the fact that the two are combined makes him horny 24/7. think of it as a sexy overload. well, that's my idea hope you like it. also, in future chapters, can you please avoid the hetero sex? i LOVE slash, hetero... not so much. no offence intended though.

why don't you just explian why he has changed

Well first you need to decide what exactly Harry is. Then you could work the Draco angle and make Draco his soul mate or his mate or some such.

I can help you w/ coming up a plot but as for helping with the story..., well I never wrote one before and I don't really have the time and effort for it.
So, here's my idea - cut it out with the female sex.
Have Draco discover Harry is fucking around w/ a lot of ppl, and Harry will 'try' to stop his urges, b/c he is getting unselfconscious of his future(only an option, you don't have to do it = this will lead to male preg, so decide for your self), Draco pursues Harry by black mailing him. Hermione will be smart, as always and figure out what ever 'special magical creature' that Harry is turning in to 'this time'. Ron might freak out, if you don't like him, just make him evil, or have him be nice and understanding if you like him around. As for if you don't like Hermione, you can always replace her role by adding Blasie (or 'and Pansy'). Harry will turn more vulnerable and depressed b/c of his status of being some 'magical sexual creature', and try to avoid other ppl's attention, but cant and is saved by Draco/or Hermione or a friend if you don't want this to be too sappy. Draco and Harry will fall in love and all that sap.
That's all I got now.

well i can say quite clearly that i love this. You write sex scenes much better than i ever could and i would love to help you out because this just cant end here. I dont know if you have already found somebody but i am still offering. From your comments i got the idea that you had a plot already but were just having difficulty putting it to words. I would really like to work on this with you but if you dont have any ideas i have some of my own that you might find interesting.

Email me at Vittani@aol.com if you want to. If not I wish you and your new partner luck with this and I cant wait to read what you come up with. Oh and when you do update could you email me and let me know, so that i dont miss it.

I wouldn't mind helping but I'm still in school and have homework so it will take a little bit and if its ok with you I have friends that are really good at writing stories that would probably love to help. My e-mail address is eliseloring151@hotmail.com. I don't have a AFF acount b/c I haven't put any of my things online yet. And I'm not very good at sex scenes so those are all yours if you want them.

ok this story is way to good to end this way so i will help u writh the plot is u whant!
i have an idea were this can go so if u whant my help e-mail me or somthing and if not
well tell me no so im not left wathing for an answer! x)

you could go from the approach of all time, Harry goes gets called to McGonagal's office and he finds out what made him grow over the summer. Draco pisses him off in the hall one night and Harry grabs him and fucks the holy hell out of him. Parsletounge made Draco horny and Harry started tormenting him, Have fun with these ideas. If none of these work email me at bhubb88@hotmail.com

Actually would Harry wonder why he has such sex drive? And would his friends know about it? Would he continue in Hogwarts? Even involving the teachers?? And how can he end up with Draco?

more please!