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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this really is a nice story, can not wait to see more...hope you continue!
Nice Chapter and great story!
Hurry Please...1000/1000
Nice Chapter and great story!
Hurry Please...1000/1000
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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! please update the next chapter soon! PLEASE, PRETTY PLEASE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP!!!!!
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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Thanks for the update.
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April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so far so good i like were this is going
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like it so far
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like where this story is headed...can't wait for the next chapter!
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good to see you got some help with the plot area, not that the constant sex was a downer. lol.
i hope you and you co-writer continue to crank out the chapters.
i hope you and you co-writer continue to crank out the chapters.
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
looking good.
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo can't wait for chapter 5!
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
um--your story's pretty good but you need to look up the difference between wither and writhe
wither- to slowly dry up (Picked flowers eventually wither and die.)
writhe- to thrash around (Fish writhe on the hook and people writhe in passion.)
It's kind of disturbing to read sex scenes where a participant is "drying up" with passion.
wither- to slowly dry up (Picked flowers eventually wither and die.)
writhe- to thrash around (Fish writhe on the hook and people writhe in passion.)
It's kind of disturbing to read sex scenes where a participant is "drying up" with passion.