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Finally! Harry has some major making-up to do!!! Can't wait!

this fic is getting quite interesting. :-)

I like it when Snape and Harry on on semi-good terms. I think it's really nice to have a Snape in a story who isn't burdened by being a spy anymore and I love this story. Keep up the good work!

I'm really enjoying this story! I hope Ginny and the others are made to pay for what they did to Harry. Can't wait for more!

Harry needs to get Draco out now! I don't know why he's hedging. I thought he be full of righteous anger & be at the Ministry before Ginny left! Ugh - now Harry develops self control... Can't wait for more!

hi! i like the development of your fic. i dunno if i should be irritated with harry's indecision or sympathize with him. i sure as hell hate his "friends and mentor." i especially hate the way ginny tries to act like the aggrieved party. i love draco's vulnerability but adamant refusal to beg. i really love his character here. so hurt but still so dedicated (though i guess he has no choice since he is mated to harry). anyway, hope to read more of this soon. ;)

I don't understand Harry's hesitation. Being without family he should have been elated about the twins and should have claimed them as soon as he remembered. Also he needs to question whether real friends would have done what his did knowing that he was going to be a father. Not only did they cause him to betray his lover but they made him turn his back on his own flesh and blood. Harry owes them nothing. He cheapens his relationship with Draco and shows himself to be an uncaring ass for not going straight to the Ministry and getting his pregnant mate out of that cell. He can't possibly think that it's good for Draco to be locked up pregnant. Maybe he and that bitch Ginny deserve each other since he only seems to care for his "friends" and she only cares for being with the boy who lived.

hi! you have an amazing story line going on here. i must say that the plot is quite original. i love draco here. he is so vulnerable yet he tries desperately to be strong for his babies. i love the way that he is not pining and wasting away for harry. he is not defined by his relationship with harry alone. he may be mated, but he is not totally lost without harry. although he knows that he needs his mate and that said mate has left him, he does not give up. i like this complexity in his character. the twist in harry's memory being altered was admittedly not original altogether. but what makes it new and interesting here is that he learns of it early on, not after he becomes close to draco again, and definitely not needing draco to remind him. i love how you wrote harry's confusion and anger. it was so real. i look forward to reading how you're going to progress with him and how he will approach draco's situation now that he knows. the characterizations are so great. i also like tonks here,she's nice to draco. another new thing here is that not everybody immediately dismiss draco's words. although they are skeptical, they are not cruel to him. i really love your story. i look forward to reading more. ;)

BITCH!!! She thought she could get away with it!!!!! I can't wait to see what harry is going to do next now
that he knows what really happened between him and draco and what his so called "friends" did. Anxiously awaitng the next chapter.

MORE!!!!!!!!!! god, I hate ginny.