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by Emptyinside

person poohbear74
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Write it, it might be interesting to see what happens...

I like the chapter.
person KaeXLi
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmmm....muggle london please!!
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like what you have done.
And cant wait to read whats going to happen next.

...sure write about Hp London adventure. ...tattoos, piercings, black leather f-me pants...etc. and perhaps a gift for Voldy??
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really funny...ha ha...snape, harry, AND VOLDIE all fainted in the story. that's great!
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still good.
person Kaitlyn
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like it. alot.
but im a bit confused. in the beginning you described Voldemort as he looked in the past, but then you said he looked all snake-like.
did i just read incorrectly? I would go look back but its really late and i have to get to bed.
Happy New Year by the way!
person SweetGirl
schedule January 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cool update soon
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually he IS a wandless-capable wizard.... grin. Hi guys!
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More please?
person poohbear74
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LIKE THIS STORY.