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by Emptyinside

schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story! Mind if I add my two cents in the Harry/Tom meetings?

One way would be the Ror (Room of Requirement). They still have the two-way dresser, or Harry can go in and "Require" there own set, Shirking one, and send it Tom.. Or Portkey rings? That would be a bit more romantic, And Harry could leave to see Tom, as well.. They could then set up times to meet in the ROR, and noone would see them.

Another would be the Chamber of secrets? It's technically off school grounds, Underground, and only Parselmouths can get in. And I always thought there was more to the chamber then just the MAIN Chamber like in the movie.

Or, Since Ali is who she is, she might know another way into hogswarts. a "Snake passage".. Only opened my parselmouth.
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Harry...damn the mudblood and bloodtraiter...they will get what's coming for them...XD
person Mino
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay an update *parties*
anyway, I was thinking about your prediciment for poor
harry and tom, maybe they could meet up in the forbidden forest,
or in hogsmeade. Tom could be in disguise, but of course, Harry
would need to escape Hermione and ron first.

Anyway, that's my idea, hope you find it helpful
I know how irritating writers block can be
keep up the good work and please update soon *throws you magic cookie*
person Jan
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting story. Can't wait for chapter 8. ^_^

Jan
person Selera
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to more. It is alot of fun reading these lovely stories. ^^ Especially ones like this.
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please hurry up and update I am loving this story and want to know what happens next. BTW i luved the bits were you made voldie, harry and Snape faint it was very Hilarious
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweet! I love Hot Topic! Great story so far!
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it!! make draco and harry best friends. then put either ellie and draco or fred/draco/george together.
Kisses
ladyroo
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I see trouble coming...and it sexy (Draco's words).
I'm glad theres another chapter to this tale.
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More please. This is really good so far.