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by Emptyinside

person tonks*is*cool
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your Story is very funny, thank you for providing so much mirth!
You asked for Idea
person shadowama
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you know i have read and reread this story so many times and i still don't know what to think about it. though i will admit the story is good is just feels rushed if that makes any sense. hope that you update soon *kisses*
person windbell
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(..Draco...) was already with somebody so there was no way he could have that sexy boy next to him...

Shouldn't it be Harry in that ()?
And when Draco has his own mate, he should lust after his mate only not anyone even they're sexy like Harry else!

More HarryVoldie please!! Miss them together!
person Mino
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay another update, Harry's explanation was fast, woah.
I think he got the point across though. So cute
that Tom was being romantic, awwww.
Also kinda got the vibe that Blaise was flirting *wink*
lol anyway keep up the good work and please update soon
*throws magic cookie*
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...Draco should have knocked before entering, but oh well. Anyway, I love Ali. She is so funny. I like the rings, and the password is great. Loverboy? So entertaining. Anyway, who are you planning to have as Draco's mate. I think it should be Blaise. They would make a cute couple. Can you kill off the mudblood and the bloodtraiter. I hate them both. They are so annoying. Doesn't Harry have Care of Magical Creatures with the Slytherins? Well, I guess not in your story, but anyway. I really love this story so much and I cannot wait till you update the next chapter.
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! Cookies! ^.^ thanks, and great chapter!
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yummy!! Cookies!! What type are they??? Are they sugar?? I love sugar cookies!! Oh riiight the actual review!! I loved ali laugh because of draco's thoughts!! I also found that harry being more composed than draco hilarous!! Please Post More!!!!!!
Kisses
Ladyroo
person kunitsu
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh I wonder how long Draco will resist this temptations to Harry, now I wonder who Draco's mate will be. Nice rings but wont the others react badly when they see it
person evalhanne
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A bit off on grammar, but the story's fun to read, it had me chuckling! Can't wait to see what happens next!
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whhoohoooo...another great chapter.
I so like this fic.
Can't wait to read more.