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for Sexual Tension at Grimmauld Place

by salton

schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really good story, no complaints here but what is taking you so long, thought you had already finished the next chapter? no offence here but I really can't wait to see where this is going. All the best, Matt
person smurff
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update damnit! You can't take breaks this long because it kills me! I need more smut/to find out what happened with our foursome! Please please please update. You know I love you - I need more.
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Avid reader, first time reviewer. This is probably my favorite fanfiction story on this site. I'm not a big Harry/Hermione fan, but somehow you managed to make Chapter 5 one of my favorites! Huh! Imagine that!!!

As for Chapter 6, it was good. I just got a bit exasperated with Hermione, trying to act up in front of Ginny. Bah! Enough dissimulation. Did Ginny really needed that??!?! Hermione has been involve passively or actively in almost every chapter! Anyway, then Voldemort and his timing! ... LOL!
Ron, he created a monster, she might as well paying him off. Don't leave him out too much ... nor Ginny! (Though I guess you'll get to that eventually)

So, basically I love this. I encourage you to keep going and I'm looking forward for your next post!



person luvhp
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bloody Hell! Chapter 5 was(pant)...was(pant)...well, it just WAS! Dear lord.
Chapter 6 was definately off to a good start, until Moldie Voldie had to interrupt!
This is going great, can't wait to see the next chapter.
person pfeil
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah! Damn meddling dark lords...

Maybe he can kill off Ron so the 3some can stay that way ;)

( I hate Ron, have you guessed? )
person pfeil
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Looks like the copy-paste failed
person bean1498
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is very nice, very sexy. I hope you'll continue it. Can't wait to see what happens during Harry's watch. :)
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Guh this is so hot I'm on fire.

I hope the nightly activities bring all the horny satisfaction it promises. Can't wait for the final climax (pun intended) :)

Update fast please!! Thanx!
person Mellow03
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story and it was hot. I like the rimmin when Hermione did her stuff to Ron. Hope would make her more dirty, as well with other guys and Ginny. Can put Ron and Harry doing stuff?? Any sexual stuff you would do, will have equally favor with heavy stuff for each favor. Favor as Blow Job as one favor, second, rimming, and other, third. For rimming, can put tongue more deep and more.
person Mellow03
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, can include the girl would say ron will love to have fun with you Harry, or other way, Harry would love to have with Ron. Same as Harry say to Ginny I think and Harry say to Hermione about Ginny to do stuff with her.