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for Sexual Tension at Grimmauld Place

by salton

schedule September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey is this story ever going to get updated???
person dristi
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hi,

your story is hot! sizzling! and sexy!

hope you're going to update or write other smut-fic....

person dristi
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hi, that was so hot!!!

pls continue, i think it's one of the best! and the dirty talking was sizzling hot...

keep up and pls update soon
person dristi
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hi, your story was damn hot and i hope you'll write more...

...pls keep up!
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to tell you i really enjoyed your story. please get another chapter up soon.
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story, but is there any more? I'd like to find out what happens in the morning... ~Frank~
person smurff
schedule September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Whimper* absolutely incredible. I LOVED it. You really do need to start writing more. Every chapter just kills me... I get that it can be hard to make yourself write but, when the product is as good as this...

Okay, if you're not going to do it for yourself, do it for us!!

It's not just the smut, although I admit that's the biggest bit that I like :D:D:D, but you actually have a plot going in the bachground and you make the sexual situations escalate in a realistic, but totally ... unreal way. What that jumble of random words meant, was that I really like it.

And I think you should write more.

NOW!
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you back again!
Great chapter, btw. Really sexy.
I was wondering if Ron and Ginny were ever going to get together ... Hermione and Harry seem pretty into each other, so I was wondering about the other two.

Your story is really one of the best here.
Don't leave us for so long. =(

Great work.
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I love this story, it's very well writen and very original. I am really looking forward to the next chapter. Please update soon
person smurff
schedule July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
... You're starting to bother me :( PLEASE UPDATE! I check about once a week and everytime I get all excited, hoping you've updated and... you HAVEN'T! Please write a little bit more... just a little (until I ask you again :D)