rate_review Reviews

At first this was the best fic. I had read... The fic showed R/H/H as equals... like a team... (as is in the books) and they were dead sexy!... but then, they drug Ron... I don't like it, but... well, it was to 'introduce' Hermione to the group sex. But this last time, it was cheat on him! the first times always was a 'alibi' for it... but this last time was to put Ron aside and cheat on him... this fic seems more and more like the hyper-typical Harry-harem... and I HATE this kind of fics!

I hope Ron to give them all a living hell... They all had cheat and betray him in the worst way... and they MUST PAY for it.

PS. I had read a review blaming Ron for leave them... well... Harry and Hermione aren't free of gilt in this... Harry practically throw him out (this is why he forgive him so easyly), and Hermione (probably felling guilty for criticise Harry in her talks with Ron) sided totally with Harry...
And another thing... after knowing all the things the diary did... you really think the locket only make them grumpy? nothing more?... no plot, nothing!?... or maybe he chose the only pure-blood to try to posses him like it did before with Ginny?... of course Harry (or Hermione) wouldn't know anything about it, but I think is mostly obvious... you only have to read when it was destroyed...

I had a friend talking about how much more plausible Harry and Hermione was, and what a great fan fic that would make, but I've really never read anything since she has said that to convince me other wise until I read your story. The chapter with Harry and Hermione was way beyond hot, well done. I agree with the other reviewer who said get rid of Ron and let Harry have both, or just let him have Hermione. Hopefully that next chapter will be up soon.

if harry get to fuck hermione then ron should get ginny and hermoine for the night. payback

great story so far. just a few grammar things that could stand to be fixed. i would suggest a beta reader or even a friend who's good with grammar to look it over for you. other wise, all of it is very hot and sexy, update soon please.

I was so excited to see a new chapter. I love this story. Harry/Hermione/Ginny threesomes are my absolute favorite things in the world, so if you want to write more of them, I certainly wouldn't object. :-)

So happy to see you writing again.

thanks

awsome chapter.
i hope ron leaves and leaves the girls to harry. he does that in the book anyway.
if u think about ron has never done anything but screw and abandon harry.
anyways keep it up

...wow... I would never had thought of writing this. This is pure
gold. A mark of true imagination. Im studying the masters
before writing my own. But now I feel a little intemidated. I
mean, all of these stories are awsm and I swear this is on my top
5 list. Please keep up the good work. And I love how you made
it more than just smut. You actually put suspense and a real
plot into it as well. Again, please keep up the good work and
please update soon

Hi, good story. Hope will see the next chapter soon. Can ya put finger-sucking after it has been in any hole and have girls or guys do rimming that have anal-favor. And without girls or guys knowing or know that inside the anal is dirty. Hope ya can put Ron/Harry. Hope will see more dirty stuff, to little nasty. It have little nasty with rimming already, but more little nasty stuff.

write moooooore write mooooooore write moooooooore..........

I really liked what you wrote...
They shouldn't have given Ron that potion though...
And one thing...
if they somehow cast the fidelius charm with Ginny as secret keeper...
and Ginny stays at their Headquather...
they wouldn't need anti anpparation charms, would they?
They could come and go as they wanted and no one would find them.

Aww, I was hoping Ron would die heroically in the DE attack...