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for I Don't Want To Grow Up

by rachxoxo

schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol ...quite amusing.
person Kay_Rage
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another good zooarmy challange. great job.
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! He got upset about a game. Tooo funny!
person ZooArmy
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
'In the middle of a Muggle children's store?' - AAAAHHHH this sentence made me laugh so hard. not good in the middle of the night, when everyone else's sleeping. AMAZING! I loved it. The idea for the quote is just great, it fits perfectly and it was yummy nevertheless. *tehe*
AND YOU DEFINITELY DESERVE A PRICE FOR VELOCITY!
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HA! that was hilarious! poor sales clerk in the video games section!! lol. I can't really imagine them standing in the middle of the toys r us that i know talking about fucking coz the video game section is really open and leads onto heaps of other areas....so there would be lots of people about. But it was still funny!!!!!!