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by oopsiedaisy

schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic, the sexual tension is so hot, that last chapter was electric. Can't wait for more!
person luvhp
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was too quick. More, please!!
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I can't wait for you to update. I really want to know what is going to happen next.
person ichiruki
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your chapters are short, short but awesome lol. I envy you a little for that ability lol.
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was good. Not how I expected it to be. Just thought it would have been longer and stuff but it was still good. I love all the stuff they do to one another. So can't wait for more.
person ichiruki
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn this entire story is a freaking tease! I just caught up, don't get me wrong, I love that you update fast, so fast I didn't realize I'd missed a few chapters, but 21 was like what? What's up with that book? I must know...if he went upstairs does that mean Hermione goes back to retrieve it and really look at it? What does it all mean!?
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hurry up! give us some sex! I'M DIEING OVER HERE!
person Kaley
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more. please, please, please more.
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
like it very much!! Please dont let it be over to soon!!
person regina88
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. So funny... and so increasingly hot. Keep it up!!! UPDATE SOON!