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Oh NO! Come on! Please let Harry get to them soon! I don't like them suffering! Come on Harry! You can do it!
Please please please update again soon!
Stef

awww man! I've been frantically checking the updates on this site for this story and you leave it at that?! *cries* COME ON!
Please please update soon! This is the good bit!
Stef

OMG OMG OMG OH SHIT OH SHIT OH SHIT!!!! BAD BAD BAD BAD BAD!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOO, they are torturing my Draco!!!! Those fucking bastards can have Mark...I only feel semi-bad for him....but DRACO!!!!! *sob* (Yes, I love it when they are torturing Draco, since I torture him myself in my fics, but at the same time, NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!)

Please, please, please, Harry, you HAVE to succeed this time!!! Kill that fucking rat-bastard Voldemort, as well as Macnair and whoever else is raping Draco!!! (and whipping Mark, but that's secondary)

I love this story, SlashPervert. You always do such an amazing job, and I was so happy for them that they got away...I was dubious about Mark entering their bed...(*cough*Harry belongs with Draco and Draco ONLY*cough*) and NOW I'm really fucking pissed at Mark for drawing the picture that got them captured!!! Stupid fucking Muggle...don't they know anything??!?!?!?!?!?! Bastard! You DESERVE to be whipped (at least a little)!!!!!

But DRACO!!!! Harry, make them stop hurting Draco!!!! Please, please, please, UPDATE SOON!!!

Okay, I gotta add that, like xXBrokenDreamsXx, I too feel that love-hate relationship with Mark. If it weren't for him, they would still be safe!!! I too am very protective of my Harry/Draco, and while I was glad that THEY weren't bothered by Mark joining them...I still kind of was.

Oh, and the capturing part came out of nowhere for me too. It was *happiness and light* and then BAM! *DARK and "OH FUCK!"* But that wasn't a bad thing at all! I think that you made it THE most effective that you could have by slamming us with THAT ton of bricks...it wouldn't have been as powerful if you had hinted at it

(more than you already did hint that they were never COMPLETELY out of danger...but then you lulled us into a false sense of security which we knew better than to believe but fell for anyway...*sigh* You great writers you!)

That being said, as soon as I finished the part where they were captured, I looked at the chapter number and saw 24-25 out of 32...so then I realized that SOMETHING had to change to reach the climax of the story...so I should've seen this coming...but I didn't...until AFTER you hit me and THEN I went back and found the clues...

Brilliant job!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

PS Mark can die...I'm okay with that. If you must kill someone, please let it be him. Ooooooo, was that his purpose all along? He would get close to Harry and Draco (and we'd all be like "WTF is he doing? They don't need him in their bed!") and then he'd get captured and killed because SOMEONE has to die...and *OF COURSE* it can't be Harry or Draco...right?

keep going and post sooooooooooooooon
bye bye

Ch. 26 It occured to me that Mary and Shelton could just be brilliant actors. But Death Eaters would simply have seized Harry the way they seized Draco and Mark and not bothered with such a tactic. I only hope Harry has enough presence of mind to attack when he's in Voldemort's presence. Occasionally I wonder why he didn't summon his wandless magic to kill Voldemort when he was enslaved in England; perhaps he didn't think he could manage with so many others around without getting Draco killed as well...

Ch. 25 This is truly horrifying. But I knew the good times couldn't last forever. When Draco was worried about those pictures in the art gallery, I couldn't help feeling the same way. If he's reading the papers and noticing the terrible events happening back in England, it made sense that someone there might be scanning the papers as well, trying to find any sign of Draco and Harry. I'm curious as to have the Death Eaters flushed them out when neither of them use magic; that must have made them especially difficult to track.

very very god keep going and post soon
and please don't let them die
bye bye

WOW! I did not even see this coming! I mean, for a whole 24 chapters it was lala la happiness (which was fun to read, by the way) and then all of a sudden they are captured. Yeah, can't wait to see next chapter though... :)

I knew it would be a matter of time before something gruesome would happen. I am curious as to how they were able to track both Harry and Draco. I was taken back at the beginning when Draco would go to read the "paper" and thought for sure that would be one of the ways at finding him, but hmmm?

I am hoping that with Harry's wand less magic that he will see his 2 lovers and then KICK ASS! Oh and I hope Mark lives.