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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story. Well, I liked most of it. I am a major Harry/Draco fan. When Mark was added, it kinda took away from the story, instead of add. Their interactions didn't flow as well for me. It was as if he was there, but not entirely useful, like having an extra thumb on your hand. Now, I know I am only one reader, but that was my opinion. They went through so much together in the two stories and seemed deeply in love. Mark is like an open marriage. If they were in love as you portrayed them (Harry and Draco),Mark shouldn't have had a chance in Hell of getting in the mix.
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am sooo going to miss this story! Fantastic!!!
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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This and the first story were so good. I could not stop reading either of them. I actually think it would be a good idea if you did a third and said how it was for all three of them living together after about maybe seven years. Would the relashionship between all three last or not? That's something I am dying to know. Well again I loved both stories and I can't wait to read some of your other stuff. Keep writing.
=Draco218
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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love both of your stories. Reading the analysis made my heart warm (I wish more writers would do analysis of their stories!). Really great writing.
Great job!
Great job!
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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow i love these two stories im gonna miss thee updates i hope you do do a sequel id love to hear more on draco harry and mark (they are too cute toghether) well i loved this and just wish to say thank you for sharing your talent with us *big squeezy hug and a cookie*
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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First off I really enjoyed this story, and I thank you again for another great book. It's not my favorite of all your stuff, mainly because even literary gore makes me a bit woozy, lol, but I'd never read a "Harry loses" fic before and I thought you did a fantastic job.
Second, I hope that, like your Bound Prince series, you go back and rework this one a bit in time. It was pretty clear that things like Mark and a lot of the story was "on the fly". It was done well, but I'd love to see some further development especially with his character, because even at the end I didn't feel I had a handle on him and I didn't like him all that much.
You write: Mark
Second, I hope that, like your Bound Prince series, you go back and rework this one a bit in time. It was pretty clear that things like Mark and a lot of the story was "on the fly". It was done well, but I'd love to see some further development especially with his character, because even at the end I didn't feel I had a handle on him and I didn't like him all that much.
You write: Mark
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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome series!!!!
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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Thank you so much for finally completing this story! I've been following it throughout and I have to say it was one of the more fantastic ones I have read and if I could, I'd nominate you for some sort of award but frankly, I'm not sure about awards and such in fanfiction... If there are any, you'd probably get one anyway!
Considering I normally don't read threesomes, this was fantastically written so congratulations to both of you! Right, I'll stop babbling now but you did a great job! I look forward to any future pieces you might bring out...
Stef
Considering I normally don't read threesomes, this was fantastically written so congratulations to both of you! Right, I'll stop babbling now but you did a great job! I look forward to any future pieces you might bring out...
Stef
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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore both of your stories. Actually it wasn't until I had discovered the sequel that I went back to reading Shooting Star, but that one - dark as it is! - is still brilliant.
Your conclusion to the story is so sweet. I'm looking forward to going back to reading the whole thing from the beginning, as I have done with JKR's books after the series was complete.
If you feel like adding a sequel, I shall be one of the first to read that, too. I may not have reviewed the story every time you had posted a new chapter, but this was one story I kept looking for every day I looked into AFF.net, hoping for an update. You can definitely call me a faithful reader, I guess ;-)
Thank you for sharing these wonderful pieces of fiction! Thank you as well for indulging the audience in your thoughts and experiences behind your writing. This does not happen often, but it certainly helps to understand how plots were developed and why they developed the way they did.
Have a beautiful Sunday, and I can't wait for more of your writing!
Your conclusion to the story is so sweet. I'm looking forward to going back to reading the whole thing from the beginning, as I have done with JKR's books after the series was complete.
If you feel like adding a sequel, I shall be one of the first to read that, too. I may not have reviewed the story every time you had posted a new chapter, but this was one story I kept looking for every day I looked into AFF.net, hoping for an update. You can definitely call me a faithful reader, I guess ;-)
Thank you for sharing these wonderful pieces of fiction! Thank you as well for indulging the audience in your thoughts and experiences behind your writing. This does not happen often, but it certainly helps to understand how plots were developed and why they developed the way they did.
Have a beautiful Sunday, and I can't wait for more of your writing!
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January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmm I really liked how it started... but as soon as the two girls came in... it kinda lost it's *magic* :((((((