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November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 19! Draco got in!!! Congrats! Things are going nicely for them!
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November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter as always!
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've just read everything so far and I must say that this story is amazing! So extremely well written and with an interesting storyline. Jealousy is one of my kinks so I'm glad to see some of that too. ^_~
Now, this chapter...
*twitchtwitch*
I guess I should have read the warnings... het sex! EEK!
Nah, I can stand het sex but there were 3 things wrong with this scenario:
1.) It didn't make sense. Draco was being insanely jealous when it came to Mark. And suddenly he wants to share Harry? It seemed OOC. :/
2.) I personally don't feel that their relationship is strong enough to be "open" (sex-wise, that is).
3.) It seemed to have been Draco-centric. It was Draco's idea. Draco himself implied that he missed sleeping with women. It just seemed... I don't know. Like Draco wanted to shag a woman and it was convenient for him that Harry (sort of) wanted to know what it was like. :/ I don't like selfish!Draco. D:
I don't get this feeling throughout the story...I just couldn't stomach this scene for this reason. :/
I'll continue reading your fic though since it's truly amazing (even if the plot doesn't go the way I want it to =P).
Hugs to you! <3
Now, this chapter...
*twitchtwitch*
I guess I should have read the warnings... het sex! EEK!
Nah, I can stand het sex but there were 3 things wrong with this scenario:
1.) It didn't make sense. Draco was being insanely jealous when it came to Mark. And suddenly he wants to share Harry? It seemed OOC. :/
2.) I personally don't feel that their relationship is strong enough to be "open" (sex-wise, that is).
3.) It seemed to have been Draco-centric. It was Draco's idea. Draco himself implied that he missed sleeping with women. It just seemed... I don't know. Like Draco wanted to shag a woman and it was convenient for him that Harry (sort of) wanted to know what it was like. :/ I don't like selfish!Draco. D:
I don't get this feeling throughout the story...I just couldn't stomach this scene for this reason. :/
I'll continue reading your fic though since it's truly amazing (even if the plot doesn't go the way I want it to =P).
Hugs to you! <3
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was so very very hot i really liked it
but i also like a scene where thheire is more interaction between the caracter,
like a treesome, sucking and fucking at the same time. totale pleaser
keep going and post sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
but i also like a scene where thheire is more interaction between the caracter,
like a treesome, sucking and fucking at the same time. totale pleaser
keep going and post sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
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November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Well Done!
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November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 18!
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November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot. But I really wanted to see Draco fuck Harry while Harry was fucking one of the girls. I'm so bad, huh?
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November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! A foursome...sort of. Really hot and really sweet! Harry is just so cute! He blushes alot! Thanks for the update!
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November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good scene, but I kind of wanted Harry to be more take charge here and a little less dependent on Draco, or maybe for Draco to "need" Harry. Draco has been fairly dominant this story, which is fine, but Harry is Harry for goodness sake. I hope he will show a little more toughness soon. Also, it would have been nice if the women got theirs as well--wishful thinking I know :) ha ha. Still, I love this story. Thanks for the update.
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November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I am so sorry that you had to take it off of the hex files. That was where I read shooting star and fell in love with and I knew I wouldn't be able to wait till you put up the sequel. Please update soon. I can't wait to read more.