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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, but please continue. I really would like to see how Snape tries to get Harry back.
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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I know it's labeled as a oneshot, but I'd really like to see more.
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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story, how does he "count the flickers on the ceiling, cast by the bedside candle," when he is blinded by the spell?, bye
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September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i... really liked it... was it just a oneshot or are you going to write more?
the end was really good, when even after all of that, it was the kiss coming from draco that finally broke harry from severus... yeah?
<3 anyways.
-smellysocks
the end was really good, when even after all of that, it was the kiss coming from draco that finally broke harry from severus... yeah?
<3 anyways.
-smellysocks
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September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just as a suggestion, you may want to put a Non-con warning on this fic and a D/s (if you don't already have that one). Also you may want to tell the readers this is a Drarry fic too... I adore Snarry, but I'm really not into Draco/Harry. At the very least mention this is a threesome if you want Harry's Master to be a surprise.