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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
shall there be another part to this? it is an easy oneshot i know, but i think a second would be nice.
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story... Do you think that you could write a follow up...?
~Misery
~Misery
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well...WOW. Is there more?
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bloopfish had some interesting comments. I think that as a "Master" Sev went too far. I love BOTH Snarry and Drarry and threesomes between them, but this was obviously a betrayal of sorts. A GOOD Master would not have allowed Draco to make Harry bleed, either. I would like to see just why Sev did it. Some of his thoughts would be good, even if they're NOT good thoughts!!
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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is fantastic. I'm really curious about what's going on in Severus' head during all of this, did he ever care about Harry or did he really not notice how much this was hurting him? Oh please, oh please write more? *puppy eyes*
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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
second chapter
oh lord please continue this
please!
oh lord please continue this
please!
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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, that so is sad, im almost crying! very well written. great work!
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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good. thought i would give anything for this to be a longer serie. maybe how Severus tries to win Harry back and so on. Great story. I hope to read more of your creations.
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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think you should continue with this story. It's to good for just one chapter!
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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was a surprise. I thought it was going to be Lucius, not Draco. I'm not all that wild about Draco/Harry, but I do think this was well written, good on the angst, and I could just see the hurt in Harry's eyes as he muttered his safe word at the end. Good job! I look forward to reading more of your work.