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for The Detention of Her Dreams

by sevisnape

schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG...the beginning of this was sooo 'secretary'...i creamed.

I definetly loved the duelality of Snape's personality, dream snape all hard, and reality snape a little softer...thought to be honest, i prefered the hard, domineering snape...

And Hermione's reactions were so true to life, logically wanting him to go, and yet yerning for him to stay...and then her heart (and libedo) winning out.

I would be very nice to see if there was someway for you to extend this story, not add to it, but go deeped in to it and make it a muily-chapter story.It could work. But obviously, its your thing...

Anyway, i really enjoyed it. Bravo
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweet, too bad there is no continuations.
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:) I cant resist a dominant Snape