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for The Detention of Her Dreams

by sevisnape

person Persy
schedule January 18, 2022 at 12:00 AM

How sweet and beautiful!!!

person Persy
schedule September 7, 2021 at 12:00 AM

So romantic!!!!!

person Persy
schedule June 17, 2021 at 12:00 AM

What a beautiful love story..

schedule April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was a very enjoyable and hot one shot. Thanks for sharing.
schedule November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed it! Thanks.
person Anon
schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really thought Snape was communicating with her beyond the grave. I like the story, but the ending may be a touch too fluffy? Maybe cut it off after she tells him to stay?

You might want to label the summary EWE, since it's not epilogue-compliant. (Unless Snape keels over in another year or two in your universe.)
person yeiko87
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is great. Sorta abrupt ending, but it was nice. Are you going to add more chapters to this? I hope you do ^.^
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
did you get that scene out of the movie, 'The Secretary'? If not, rent it and watch it. It's very similiar.
person Anon
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?