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Hurry and add on. This is a great story. Glad I found it!!!

yeah great chapter.

yeah great chapter.

yeah great chapter.

yeah great chapter can't wait for more so please update again and soon.

Hi, good story and I hope the primary relationship would be those three boys or two if you want, draco, harry, and ron. TWo boys as their best friend, and draco because not as long with hermione. Hope you don't make her treate them like object something to throw away since they are friends and would be primary relationship. Or primary people that she has sex often and care about them. Can include foursome. Girls together is fine. Hope the trio will love each other in their action and in words.

Daaaaaaaaaaaamn!! Bloody Brilliant, fucking fantastic! Can't wanit for the next chapter. Love to see who the guest is? Oh and I know Marcus Flint is dog butt ugly in the movies, but I recently stumbled across his pics, and Oh Merlin is that man H.O.T!!! Yeah, maybe he could join in the fun :)

VERY VERY VERY GOOD KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
BYE BYE

I'm guessing SEVERUS SNAPE if we are talking "slytherin" special guest!! SQUEEE girl, u rocked for ur first slash action!!! I'm proud, I love slash lol!!! Congrats for all your efforts, you also made it in my rec readings!

First of all, I would like to say that despite your trepidation you wrote the slashy moments well. There was one small mistake. At the end, you have Seamus splashing Dean's back, and then, you have him pulling out of Dean. This is slightly confusing, and you should re-edit this section. Now, I've come to the difficult part of my review. I must be honest here. This chapter was lackluster for me because I don't like to see Hermione with anyone except Draco, Harry, Ron, or Blaise. I obviously enjoyed the previous chapters of this fic, and I will probably enjoy the next chapter with the return of the Slytherins. Please understand that my comment isn't intended as a flame. This fic is well written, and my problem with this chapter is because of my own bias. It has nothing to do with your writing ability, and I debated about whether to review this chapter or just wait for the next. I HOPE that I made the right decision, and I look forward to the next chapter of this fic.