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VERY VERY GOOD KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
BYE BYE

I like your story but i think it is time little Hermione started getting pay back the way the snakes are treating her.

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more.

Damn, Damn, Damn!!!! Slytherin orgy in the hallway, with a taste of Gryffindor. What a meanie Draco was to leave her there all naked and cold ;)
Hmm, but who shall stumble upon her??? *rubs hands together*

Happy Holidays and I definately look forward to coming back after Christmas. I've never wanted to come back so quickly before, LOL.

Hi, great story. Can you have hermione forcully sucking and licking the anal of female and male out. Then later she will enjoy it like she did with Pansey, sorry if wrong spelling. Cleaning the boy's tool out after been in her back hole like the girl suck after in her front hole. Can include finger rimming, alot as well as mouth rimming, as well as it is mixed well with other favor, sex and blow job, those favor. Hope will make her love to have all the boys and girls, especially in her house since she know her more than in her emeny's house, draco's house. Can do all those kids together and have an orgy? Mixed with boys and girls having sex with each other and same gender with other same gender in same room. Keep it up.

You are one nasty heffa. This PWP has some of the most depraved and delicious sex scenes you've written yet. I like how you're treating Hermione...wow. Who knew Pansy was a dominatrix in disguise...that was hot. Merry Christmas to you too...lol

I want to preface what I'm about to say by saying this. This review isn't meant to be a flame nor is it meant to be a request to change your story. PLEASE don't take it that way. Well, here goes.

I didn't like this chapter. It was just too intense for my tastes. It seemed Hermione was forced into accepting Nott and Pansy rather than having her concede to her own desires like in the other chapters of this fic. Draco, Blaise, and Theo collectively gave her more pain than pleasure, and I found it more disturbing than erotic.

The reason that I'm leaving this review is because I don't intend to read any more of this fic, and I didn't want to just disappear from the review board without you knowing why. I think that you are a good writer, and I feel sure that I will read another of your fics in the future.

I reiterate; my review isn't meant to be taken as a flame. It's just my personal opinion of this particular chapter.

My eyes started to burn and tears trailed down my cheeks. l was crying and like, why? l wasn't sad or hurt. l hadn't ever cried while reading before. Then l realized. l was jealous of Hermione. And aroused. and the two combined made me cry, which in turn made me laugh. And like they say in Steel Magnolias, laughing through tears is my favorite emotion. So thankyou!

I think Hermione would appreciate a well rounded eduction. Let her be dominant. At least once. OMG! With Neville, oh please? For me, for christmas?

I think Hermione would appreciate a well rounded eduction. Let her be dominant. At least once. OMG! With Neville, oh please? For me, for christmas?