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i love it!

ahh that was cute smutty and all around great for a short little fic
keep it up!! i would read more of your stories

Aww sweet, I liek that they are friends and not enemies.

I'm sorry but I had to stop reading it from the beginning. You need to fix all of the spelling errors, hun. One or two is fine. But when there's so many spelling errors one after the other it turns readers off. It's not even the spelling at times.

Because Hermione had ofter stayed at the Weasley's for long periods of time, she was considered family and was allowed to wander the house.

Is that supposed to mean 'Because Hermione had often stayed at the Weasleys or 'Hermione had been offered'? It's the little things that confuse us and turn us off from reading it. I would advise you to go back and re-read and re-edit it.