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for Sleepless Nights

by soldiersgirl0709

person smmz79
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok so i was close he brings her to him.... oh that was great 'is there a woman beneath your robes' talk about awkward
person smmz79
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg how embarrassing poor draco and hermione... lucius is really enjoying himself this is quite funny
person smmz79
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
how hot is that that he is teaching hermione how to please him... wow great chap!!!!!
person smmz79
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice chap... so they are visiting dracos family this should be interesting i was wondering how you would write lucius... and narcissas embarrassment should be funny
person smmz79
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved this chap... and i am glad that you wrote it with some awkward moments, keep it close to reality bc i know when i met my future in laws it was full of those moments
person smmz79
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow what an interesting twist to this relationship i love it and i laughed so hard at dracos response...
person smmz79
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved this chap... i just love it when you throw lucius into situations that make him blush i cannot wait to read everyones response and of course the action
person smmz79
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaahhh he told her that he loved her and she returned his feelings... ohh and harry and ron know why lavendar is a real bitch.... i know this is horrible but i am drawn to fics with ron as an idiot or 'the bad guy' ohhh my lips are starting to pucker bring on the lemons
person smmz79
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaahhh that was sooo sweet way to go draco... your little authors note gives us a very nice promise for upcoming sexual interactions...
person smmz79
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you know i love lemons... lemon in my tea lemon cake lemon bars the scent lemon... :-) your a genious SG