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for Welcome Home Mummy

by Roquet

person tyree
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was sooooooo cute. Thanks for the fluffy read, it was great.
person NightLo
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is so lovely, thanks for it!! And I like the use of Gemini more than something like Scorpious...
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful!
person ZooArmy
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I think I#ve rotten out about four teeths with such sweet fluff, but it was worth every single one. soooooooo cute *sigh*
person Leentjef
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice and can't you write more abut the fammily
keep writing and post
bye bye
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww its so cute! you should write a whole story, H and D getting together and all the kiddies coming along! I have a goofy smile on my face now!
person Coralynn
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not too fond of the breast feeding, I think that should be kept for people with breasts, hehe.

But that's just me, so no, I'm not flaming. I liked that there was a little something I wasn't used to it means you have your own ideas and that's wonderful ^_^. I liked the story. I thought it was very sweet, just perfect for someone who hasn't had a good day.
person Heksy
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now don't you go there.
Who said it sucks?
I think it's a lovely little fic.
I wish my husband did things like that.
You did great, don't let anyone tell you otherwise!
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awe thats so cute!